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Chapter 24 - Historical Banter


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This was written a long time ago, while the main story progressed, and I'm... uncomfortable with it... I think it's potentially extraneous, and not all that well-written. I think I know why/ how it fits, but I can't help thinking it's a bit jammed into the flow of the whole, and I'm not sure what to do about that.

Anyway. Comment away!

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